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by Hopeless Heart on Tue Aug 05, 2008 11:36 pm
We dim and we fade
Until we all just look the same
Are you tired of the pain?
Are you sick of the blame?
How about you close your eyes
And look to the other side
Forget all the lies
Everything’s worth a try
That ache in your heart
Isn’t going to part
That song in your head
Isn’t going to bed
Open your mouth and sing it out loud
Don’t slink into the shadow, be proud
That ache and song are a sign
That you’re one of a kind
You haven’t dimmed or faded
You haven’t been tainted
You’re the star that shines through
While all the others turn blue
12th July 2008
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Wrote this while watching TBPID!
Until we all just look the same
Are you tired of the pain?
Are you sick of the blame?
How about you close your eyes
And look to the other side
Forget all the lies
Everything’s worth a try
That ache in your heart
Isn’t going to part
That song in your head
Isn’t going to bed
Open your mouth and sing it out loud
Don’t slink into the shadow, be proud
That ache and song are a sign
That you’re one of a kind
You haven’t dimmed or faded
You haven’t been tainted
You’re the star that shines through
While all the others turn blue
12th July 2008
--
Wrote this while watching TBPID!
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Re: Shine ...
by NØthing_At_All on Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:15 am
*is proud of Heather*
Wow, you're really good!
Wow, you're really good!
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Re: Shine ...
by Hopeless Heart on Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:17 am
Why thank you
It's about Gerard kind
It's about Gerard kind
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Re: Shine ...
by Make Believe. on Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:18 am
i like the last stanza the best.
and you can rhyme! i wish i could =)
i like it, and also its easy to see how TBPID! inspired it, which is cool.
and you can rhyme! i wish i could =)
i like it, and also its easy to see how TBPID! inspired it, which is cool.
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Re: Shine ...
by Hopeless Heart on Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:22 am
Yes i rhyme, i can't help it
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Re: Shine ...
by NØthing_At_All on Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:23 am
it sounds like it's about Gerard!
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11/29/08-->Saving Abel, Shinedown, and AVENGED SEVENFOLD!
"It's official, Avenged Sevenfold loves Greensboro, man!"-M.Shadows
FUCKING GREATEST NIGHT OF MY ENTIRE LIFE!
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Emily's Funds:
Eddie's Fund: $20.92
NZ fund: $25.63
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Shotgun Sinners; Because No One Fan Girls Like We Do.
NØthing_At_All- Dirty Babe
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Number of posts: 5145
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*takes sign down*
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