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The Prolix Song.

Post by Guest on Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:28 pm

I really strongly and vehemently wish I could write songs that had less lyrics in them,
But every time I sit down and try to write a song my head starts to overflow ive got so very many things I wanna say,
It becomes extremely difficult in terms scandulent rythm to fit a musical framework around so very many words,
and every other songwriter Ive ever met in this industry says that my overwordy songs are utterly and totally absurd.

CHORUS:
Im a prolix songwriter i have a very hard time,
fitting such an extraordinarily and unnecessarily large number of syllables into the highly limited confines of a line.

I'll be honest with you ive been writing these overstuffed lyrics ever since i was 14 or 15 years old its been really tough on me,
it means i have to work 7 or 8 or 9 times as hard as any other songwriter to earn exactly the same god damn royalty fee,
and i know im being an idiot and its probly got something to do with my anxiety and im totally confused and i really dont know,
and all i can do is sit here and wish to high heaven i could simply go la la la la la la la la la like Kylie Minogue.

CHORUS:
But, Im a prolix songwriter i have a very hard time,
fitting such an extraordinarily and unnecessarily large number of syllables into the highly limited confines of a line.

Im a prolix songwriter i have a very hard time, coz' sometimes my verbosity is so over the top that i have try my absolute upmost and squeeze my eyes shut and think Way way Way back into the past as far as i possibly can so that i can even hope to remember the word with which i was supposed to..oh fuck..lalalala, minogue... ooh, RHYME!!

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Post by Mrs Tom Felton on Wed Oct 22, 2008 7:56 pm

Hahahaha thats funny.
Make a video of you singing it so we can hear it!

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Re: The Prolix Song.

Post by Guest on Wed Oct 22, 2008 11:02 pm

hokay

i'll do it after broadcasting school tomorrow night =]

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Post by NØthing_At_All on Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:32 pm

OMM, that's awesome!

I know what you mean though, I write like that too.

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Re: The Prolix Song.

Post by Guest on Thu Oct 23, 2008 6:31 pm


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Post by Mrs Tom Felton on Thu Oct 23, 2008 7:12 pm

Hahahahahaa I LOVE IT!

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Post by ¿Viva La Gloria? on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:18 pm

That was amazing!
I loved it.

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Post by Loner on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:37 pm

eeeip... the NZ accent comes through differently on the net xD

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Post by Guest on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:43 pm

LOL

really? i didnt know i sung with an accent

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Post by Guest on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:44 pm

Thats sooo cool!!!

the NZ accent does come through ae... especially Kylie Minouge

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Post by Guest on Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:48 pm

lolololol

thats something ima work on then XD

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Post by Hopeless Heart on Fri Oct 24, 2008 12:18 am

That's awesome!
I'm surpised you didn't faint from lack of air.
The chorus is really funny with one short line and then really long ones XD

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Post by Mrs Tom Felton on Fri Oct 24, 2008 9:06 am

its cool

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Post by McBowden on Fri Oct 24, 2008 7:38 pm

its cool. =]
Go NZ accent!!!!

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Post by NØthing_At_All on Sun Oct 26, 2008 1:34 pm

heehee, you have an accent!

you sound great though, the song is awesome, BTW!

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Post by Guest on Sun Oct 26, 2008 1:39 pm

why thankyou honey!

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Post by NØthing_At_All on Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:07 pm

oh jeez, if your accent is obvious to other NZ people, how bad would my accent be?

*muses* <--is that the right word?

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Post by NØthing_At_All on Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:08 pm

your welcome, BTW!

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Post by Guest on Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:09 pm

yea thats the right word haha

i dont even notice my accent... wow haha

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Post by NØthing_At_All on Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:12 pm

mine doesn't come out all the time, but when it does, I sound like Miley Cyrus.

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