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Shotgun Sinners

A New Era Is Coming...


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    Post by Hopeless Heart Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:36 am

    We dim and we fade
    Until we all just look the same
    Are you tired of the pain?
    Are you sick of the blame?

    How about you close your eyes
    And look to the other side
    Forget all the lies
    Everything’s worth a try

    That ache in your heart
    Isn’t going to part
    That song in your head
    Isn’t going to bed

    Open your mouth and sing it out loud
    Don’t slink into the shadow, be proud
    That ache and song are a sign
    That you’re one of a kind

    You haven’t dimmed or faded
    You haven’t been tainted
    You’re the star that shines through
    While all the others turn blue

    12th July 2008

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    Wrote this while watching TBPID!
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:15 am

    *is proud of Heather*

    Wow, you're really good!
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    Post by Hopeless Heart Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:17 am

    Why thank you

    It's about Gerard kind XD
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    Post by Make Believe. Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:18 am

    i like the last stanza the best.
    and you can rhyme! i wish i could =)
    i like it, and also its easy to see how TBPID! inspired it, which is cool.
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    Post by Hopeless Heart Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:22 am

    Yes i rhyme, i can't help it XD
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Tue Aug 05, 2008 10:23 am

    it sounds like it's about Gerard!
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    Post by Guest Wed Aug 06, 2008 5:29 am

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    I think that just about sums it up!
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    Post by Guest Wed Aug 06, 2008 5:29 am

    oh and

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    just for the sake of it!
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    Post by . Fri Aug 15, 2008 3:18 am

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    aw its the wrong time for this Crying or Very sad *takes sign down*

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