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A New Era Is Coming...


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    His Perfection

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    Post by Angel Of Unknown Thu Aug 07, 2008 6:15 am

    Peering through this broken window
    Perched upon this branch
    He gazes at your fragile frame curled up in the corner
    Years have past he's waited so long
    Ten thousand fists against your vulnerable state
    And although your hazels have not yet cried
    He knows your torn inside

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    Speechless, worthless, Mindless
    All alone and afraid
    Too many times unable to stop
    Fueling him with rage
    Countless attempts but he’s here now
    Go on, Run away with him

    Verse 2
    I your dreams, you’ve met
    Such an innocent and perfect wreck
    Trailed by the deceiving of his own
    He’s not welcome back
    Prayers in the silence
    Forgiveness is his Way out
    20 thousand fangs against his vulnerable state
    But…… Forbidden to cry

    Chorus
    Speechless, worthless, Mindless
    All alone and afraid
    Too many times unable to stop
    Fueling them with rage
    Countless attempts but he’s here now
    Go on, Run away with him

    Verse 3
    A silent whistle that’s all it took
    Out from the dungeon you crawl
    Recognizing the perfection
    You run into his arms, together as one
    Shedding the many tears that have been waiting to fall
    Now never to be parted again

    Chorus
    Speechless, worthless, Mindless
    All alone and afraid
    Too many times unable to stop
    Fueling them all with rage
    Countless attempts but he’s here now
    Go on, Run away with him
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    Post by Slaughtermatic Sounds Thu Aug 07, 2008 6:30 am

    Shocked wow...
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    Post by Guest Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:03 am

    ^ what she said...

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    Post by Hopeless Heart Thu Aug 07, 2008 7:43 am

    I agree Shocked

    i love verse 3!
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Fri Aug 08, 2008 2:33 am

    *is speechless*

    all I say is fjsfjafj akfjakjd!
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    Post by Angel Of Unknown Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:28 am

    Tehe yaay.
    Is there anything you guys think i need to work on??
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:33 am

    um, getting famous!
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    Post by Angel Of Unknown Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:44 am

    LoL i mean is it too long?
    Is it too hard to understand?
    etcetc
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:47 am

    no, my stuff is Way longer.

    It isn't too hard to understand either.

    it's perfect!
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    Post by Angel Of Unknown Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:49 am

    Yaay thanks for that.
    Very Happy:D
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:50 am

    thanks for letting us read it Very Happy Very Happy
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    Post by Guest Sun Aug 17, 2008 8:46 am

    Oh Im so inspired to draw something right now...

    mind if I quote your awesome song?

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