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    Post by NØthing_At_All Mon Jun 14, 2010 7:54 am

    There is a community on LJ that I am a part of called 100_words. You're supposed to write anything you want, but it must be 100 words exactly. I've done 2 so far. I'll post them here as well from now on.

    The first one was posted on January 18, 2010. It was called "Dance"

    "It takes more than just words to say how it feels. The warmth of your skin. The depth of your eyes. You are breathtaking, dancing around the room to the beat of your own drum. You are smiling and laughing, and I’m lightheaded from it all. You look my way and flash a grin, and I am gone. How can I think when you look like that? You are so close when we embrace, but you are still so far away when we part. You are everything, I am nothing, and we could be something if you danced with me."

    The second one was posted June 13th, 2010. It was called "Skin"

    "I find myself dreaming of you. I imagine your hands on my waist and my hair. I think of your lips on my collarbone. I dream of the sounds you’d make as we twisted and turned under the sheets. I think of this like a play. I picture the exposition, as we’d make eyes over dinner. I picture the inciting incident: that first kiss. The rising action as you brought me closer to the edge. The climax as it all became too much. The falling action as we slowed down. The resolution as we stopped and you held me close."
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    Post by Hopeless Heart Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:00 am

    That sounds similar to this

    And those two are really good
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:02 am

    Hmmm...interesting. I've never seen that before.
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    Post by Hopeless Heart Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:08 am

    Yeah I just found it today, looks kind of interesting.
    Be better if we did something like that...
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:17 am

    Also, thank you for saying they were good. I didn't even see that! Embarassed

    Haha, we could.
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Wed Jun 16, 2010 5:01 am

    I just posted this one. It's called "I Want".

    I want you. I want every part of you. I want your skin on my skin. I want your hair between my fingers. I want your soft lips, forever smiling, pressed against my own. I want your rough, calloused hands on my body, feeling all of my imperfections. I want those beautiful eyes looking at me, taking me in. I want to hear the sounds you’d make. I can’t even begin to imagine what they would be. Would you moan? Would you scream? Or would you be silent? After we were through, would you hold me? Would you turn away?

    I'm starting to notice a pattern, between the second one and this one.
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    Post by Hopeless Heart Wed Jun 16, 2010 7:11 am

    Yeah I notice it too...
    Maybe you should find another subject?... Just a suggestion

    Wow that last one was real vivid or maybe that's just cause that's how I feel, or the beginning of it anyway.
    One day I do hope you find someone who you can be you with and purely you.
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:13 am

    Haha, I just wrote the first thing that popped into my head. Also, I hope so too. And I'm sorry if it was too vivid. I just wrote what i felt. My thoughts are very vivid sometimes.
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    Post by Hopeless Heart Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:26 am

    Don't be sorry, it wasn't a bad feeling
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    Post by NØthing_At_All Wed Jun 16, 2010 8:37 am

    Oh, I thought you meant that it was creepy-vivid.

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